In the musical production of “Big Fish” of the Holy Trinity Diocesan High School, the scene with the Western trial did not particularly stand out to me because although it was done well, it could be improved in several ways. This particular scene in the script caught my attention for it could be shown in an infinite amount of styles, and it would be interesting to see how our own school’s production would do it!
In my own imagination, here is how I’ve pictured it:
Sandra sits in the chair beside the bed, shuts her eyes. As Edward tries to sleep, the television comes to life.
[SFX: STATIC. BUZZING. (Sounds from a Western)]
(The beginning of a dementia dream.) The colour in the background changes to red, as the lights dim.
Cowboys and Western townsfolk emerge from the TV. The bedroom transforms into an Old West saloon.
The Western townsfolk is divided in two groups, one coming on from stage left, and the other coming on from stage right. In staggered lines, they move across downstage. They mingle shortly upon passing each other.
They then form a semicircle, opening up to the audience, Edward in the centre. He notices the commotion, and proceeds to say his line. (“Who are you people?! Get out of my room!”) Will appears downstage dressed as a Wild West sheriff. The music starts, and Will and Edward begin the song. The Western folk reacts to the song appropriately and with lots of energy.
After the first chorus ends(There’s gonna be a hangin’ tonight), a dance sequence (a pair of dancers or a small group) will materialize in the centre, Will on one side of it and Edward on the other, showing the two opposing sides. The Western folk cheer as they dance.
The second verse starts and upon reaching the line What comes next, the Western folk move around Edward and Will, gathering together on one side of the stage to form a jury (two rows of people, the front row kneeling or leaning down in order to avoid blocking the back row from the audience view). The judge will be further upstage at the centre, standing in a podium.
The song continues, Will and Edward throwing accusations at each other, until the judge makes his decision to that Edward is guilty. On “Take him away,” a couple of the Western townsfolk grab Edward and drag him to his bed, lifting him onto it as he gestures as if there is an imaginary noose around his neck.
As the song builds towards the end, the townsfolk gather around the hospital bed, regarding Edward with accusatory looks. On the last line of the song that is held, everyone turns to the audience as the finale, while Edward falls onto his bed in a resigned manner.. When the song ends, Will and the Western Characters exit. The lights get bright once more, and the colour in the background switches from red.
[SFX: THUNDER]
Edward screams, clutching his neck. He takes his hands away, surprised to find there’s no noose. Sandra wakes, panicked to see Edward in this state.
I believe that our school’s production could easily pull off this scene, for it doesn’t really need much props except for the bed and the podium, which definitely would fall under budget. This scene has great potential to impress the audience and stand out among all the other scenes because of the intensive choreography between Edward and Will, as well as various formations of the Western townsfolk. The movement around the stage would help decorate this scene. Overall, I feel that if this scene is pulled off on stage, it would be one of the greatest and most entertaining ones out of the entire musical!






